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jayrbee777
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Again I’m getting out my dictionary! My memories of high school science are distant & questionable & I needed to see if protons and electrons are really what I think they are — could there be other meanings? Got myself into a quantum loop and maybe that’s where I belong! It’s a powerful poem with some frightening (to me anyway) undertones. Just one question: I’ve read it half a dozen times and I still don’t know if winds is a noun or a verb? [With convection winds a turban in the clouds/spinning monuments in his honor ] It’s that annoying literal side of me coming out again. Sorry! 😉