Re: Re: Secret Garden

Home Forums Critique Central Poetry Removed Re: Re: Secret Garden

#350330

giddingsgang
Participant

That kind of love that opens us to something more of ourselves is never to be forgetten it seems even when others love us well for years. An expressive poem of the lingering staying power of exactly that. Rhyming done so effectivly here – by that I think I mean that it allows everything to be held lightly rather than going heavy.