Re: RE: Sam’s Ice Cream

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sukecal
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This is great content for a poem John.

You might experiment with other poem forms and structures, just to see where it takes you.

For some reason, I’m thinking that couplets would more effectively communicate the meaning of the poem.

Perhaps because mentally challenge people speak in short sentences?

I’m usually not a fan of dialog in a poem, but I think this one has the capacity for it.

Good job.

tp 😉