Re: Re: REVISED INFERTILITY HELL-opinions please!

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Hi Pegs,
I have always liked the preface. When shopping for a book myself, the preface gives me a “glimps” into the story before I buy. However, in this case I am finding that it might be confusing to the reader. There is so much more to the story that I am afraid the preface is giving the wrong impression. The book is generally about my struggle with secondary infertility, but I must include the parts of my past that led to the path I ended up taking.

Thank you for the question, it just confirms that I need to jump right into it!