Re: Re: RECOMPENCE

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Thank you Kevin, TP, Fred, Lisa, Angel and Nordin. This one hits close to home, so… // I have noticed one slip up as I came back to read the comments: I have misspelled “Recompen(s)e”; so there, now I have corrected it. Any suggestions for the tangled metaphor TP referred to?// Once, again, thank you guys so much for reading because this one was very hard to put out there.