Re: RE: RECOMPENCE

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megamillions
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Shonte’…this is an amazing piece. You nailed some deep ‘stuff’ here.
The last line works really well for me, also.

“With each stare as
blank and cold
as the life
that was taken”

WOW!
You gave me some serious imagery here.
You did an excellent job on this.
I look forward to more.
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