Re: RE: Rainbows and Omelets

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FaithW.Albrecht
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I like the same two as the others.  I think the reason is the rhythm of the lines and the easiness of the rhymes.  The two poems are entertaining with an inventive use of words.  The Cowboy poem seemed just a bit awkward, the flow you achieve in the others is missing, as well as the whimsical wording, like keeping “my insides in”. 

 

I’m new to this site, what I say may not have any relevance at all. Overall I love the poems, I’ve been a fan of these Silverstein types since I was a kid.

 KM