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abbyroze
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Your writing style flows very well and keeps things interesting. I was actually sorry that it was so short and even a bit vague. It would be great to see some parts expanded on; for example, why you made the decision to join the force, what Steve did to earn those decorations, and more details about unpleasant police calls – people love to read about those.

Nice work.