Thanks Lillies, those are all good suggestions. I appreciate your generosity in taking time to respond.
And I will post a little excerpt when I get this story finished; it is one I am writing in a notebook in my purse when I find myself sitting waiting as sometimes happens—a little busy work? Too many projects on the go, including writing projects (a novel) sewing projects, household projects, garden projects…. Life is fun.
What do you write? Regards, Elaine