Re: Re: Now ICU, Now I Don’t

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silverjoy
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Same as Elibet here. Great read till “To be continued.” Everything after that could have been summed up in one sentence.

I wanted the ending to take me back to YOU. e.g. how you were affected by all this, what your state of mind was after going from brave intern to wise skeedaddler. After all from the “get go” this story is about you, and should stay that way till the end.

Paul