Re: Re: Now ICU, Now I Don’t

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Bruce
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Pegs,
I enjoyed the read until the …to be continued… part. I think you should just write is as it happened. Take us through the nerve-wracking half hour, the accusations of who’s to blame and the end with the police bringing him back for id ect.

I like your style:)
Elizabeth