Re: RE: new to the forum and would like some feedback

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Hi there,

and welcome to the forums.  You seem to have a unique idea, but what you have shown us so far, is not a story, they are just happenings.  If what you write is spiritual, give us a broader spectrum of what you are trying to accomplish to get your idea (s) over to you reader.  May I suggest that you read several of the stories/meditations, etc. in this forum.  This will give you a better of idea of what to write, so those who critique will have something to work with.

I must agree with Elizabeth, you have much work to do on both of these offerings.

LilliesCarol