Re: Re: Never Enough

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giddingsgang
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I like this and know something of it – not an easy grasp – in reality or in poetry
It seems that you are trying to contrast – about what is enough and what looks like enough? not exactly sure.
wondering if keeping the verses one each one (sisters?) toegether might be more effective – just wondering