I read this three times. The last one out loud, and then I got its message. Nicely done.
I think the thing that I got caught up on was the quick change between the following:
Took you out and bought you stuff
When my father died
This just seemed so abrubt, I got hung up there. I don’t know how you could change this, probably just making the “when my father died” another stanza/ or NOT. There is a lot of depth here and well stated otherwise.