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megsouza
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To choose between the offerings, the second would work best if bite came first…the nostril assaulting bite of metallic sulfur.

In trying to mentally think of the smell of a fired gun, my mind went through several possibilities.  Then I thought maybe your protag could do the same thing…mind reeling…sulfur, oil, metal, stale burn. 

Good luck!