Re: RE: Need description help

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littleindian78
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Hi Bob – I had managed to describe the sweaty, icky smell of her assailant.  He stinks.  I got wrapped up in the smell of the gun before I learned (from here) that was not a good idea.  At least I had half the description right huh?

There’s hope for me yet.