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SunStar
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Kevin –

Thanks for sharing! Since it was more about putting your twist on two different works, I’m not going to really do a critique of the poem…

I do like how you decided to go with a rhyming scheme on this, and want to point out that you did great with the rhymes itself…

Good job!

John