Re: Re: My First Book: Chapter Five

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robfp
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@kris0707 wrote:

Star-Dreamer or anyone is welcome to answer,

I was thinking a bit more about the “head hopping” issue and how in this particular story there are technically 5 main characters. Wouldn’t I have to “head hop” with so many characters or is there an easier way?

Thanks again for the help so far. 🙂

It’s a POV issue. The easiest way to present each character’s thoughts is to do so in chapters devoted to each character’s POV. Tom Clancy and others often use this method.