Re: RE: Music on the Wind

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sukecal
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Hi Kristy,

Lovely wording.

I’d like to suggest a title change….”Wind Music.”

When I think of Music on the Wind, I think of I used to stroll across campus when the marching band was playing on the far north side…..I remember I could hear the piccolos and flutes way before I could hear the tubas…..which always seemed strange to me…but the physics professor explained it was quite scientifically correct.

So when I think of music on the wind…I think of music carried by the wind….however…your poem seems to be about the music the wind makes.

tp 🙂