Re: Re: Man Eating Door

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rawpowergirl
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Thank you, Nordin. Yes, it would read better with the period after door removed. At the time I was creating this, the word vicious was not what I wanted to call it! I was nice. 🙂

Thank you, Elizabeth. I don’t know about the ouch because my pain level is almost null and void. The door was not installed. I was moving it from the storage buidling, and more concerned about infection because I had not cleaned the door. So far, so good. It’s going to be a long while before it’s healed.