Re: Re: Man Eating Door

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b00kw3rm
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This is interesting.. I am left contemplating who ate who here, the door or the armadillo… wait, where did I get that from?.. no, it is the poet vs. the door, right? Unique twist as the door is animated… and then there is the theme of perspective? who’s perspective.. the door’s? A lot to contemplate here… Thats what makes it unique.. Hmm… I think I would get rid of that period between door and had an appetite.. I read it as the door had an appetite… that is why I am saying maybe that period isn’t needed there.. Regardless, I like this..