Re: Re: Living in a Box

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IleanaCarmina
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I could see a lonely lady out somewhere near N.Y. hunched inside that box. I think there were a few things that i might have done different line where I broke the lines up but hey it’s your poem and from what my mind saw it’s great just as it is.