Re: RE: John’s Sorrow

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sukecal
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Wonderful poem, Amy.

You’ve been a great mentor to me, so it’s difficult for me to find something to critique in this work.

I would have liked to known why the subject couldn’t connect with the lady….did she reject him….was there some other circumstance…..but perhaps it is enough to know that he languished without her.

tp 🙂