Re: Re: Inheritance

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AKnursewriter
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This was GREAT! And so very true. Money comes and goes, and so does the thrill of having it. But when my kids or grandkids give me a hug and say they love me…nothing touches that!

One tiny nitpicking point: privilege.

This is a poem that I would be proud to have written