Re: Re: I am infinite. (sort of a poetic prose)

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LorrieAT
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I did not mean to offend you, Eileen; but rather to encourage you to apply yourself more productively. Some of what you wrote does have a poetic tenor but is all mixed up with the rest. I really liked the part about the gravel road and your feelings toward it. Perhaps if you picked a specific theme
and wrote about that you might find it rewarding. I know what you mean about feeling like you are young in an old mind. When I was your age I felt the same way. I had difficulty with the silliness of those my own age. I felt like “Why don’t they grow up?” Many of us today are old souls and are much more intune with the universe than with the confines of this little ball on which we find ourselves. Sometimes I feel like I am in prison here. I feel like I am not a part of what is happening in this world. But we all have to make the best of the situation in which we dwell. Someday we will, I am confident, know why all of this was necessary. Take heart, Goodness will prevail. ( though it doesn’t seem so now )