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suda
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Agree with adgwriter. You need to invoke the five senses (smell, fell, etc). Also, you will pull the reader in more if you share things via dialog vs narrative. I had a hard time with this when I first started, but after being beat up by publishers/editors about it, I have to admit, they were right. Having the reader Learn through character dialog is much better than through Gods eyes.