Re: Re: High School Chemistry Lesson (PAD day 8)

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William87
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Fantastic metaphor! Bravo!

It just so happens that I am a fan of inner monologue and parallel, simultaneous existence (see:Aristoi) — so I kinda like the () added on. They add space, time to think, and that inner person second-guessing or putting the rest of the truth into what’s been said “out loud”.

Very nice read here 🙂