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AKnursewriter
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Angel,
I feel like I’ve just had my morning devotionals. 🙂
Very nice and very true. This gives me some food for thought today.
Just one minor point, I hope you don’t mind.
“the creeks and rivers that flow into the vaulted sea” – vaulted has a definition of “having a hemispherical vault or dome”. Perhaps you meant “vaunted” or some other similar word?
Once again, I enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing this wisdom with us men, too. 🙂