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barb schmeling
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fredblue – 2009-09-28 9:04 AM Angel, I feel like I’ve just had my morning devotionals. 🙂 Very nice and very true. This gives me some food for thought today. Just one minor point, I hope you don’t mind. “the creeks and rivers that flow into the vaulted sea” – vaulted has a definition of “having a hemispherical vault or dome”. Perhaps you meant “vaunted” or some other similar word? Once again, I enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing this wisdom with us men, too. 🙂

Thanks Fred for the info, and no I don’t mind when someone helps me with a word or the meaning of a word, etc. I will get my dictionary out and look up a more suitable word. Thanks for catching that and also for the nice comment. 🙂