Re: Re: He Came (take two)

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jayrbee777
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Elibet — mmmm, not a muggled thought at all. I know what you’re saying. That’s what I was going for with “life”. I think I tried “lifetime” too (implying other lives) — but that didn’t quite do it for me either. “World” feels too physical — to me anyway (as opposed to spiritual/emotional/other-worldly). Realm might come closer in meaning, but I dunno — it still feels weak or somewhat vague to me. Domain, area, sphere, kingdom, existence, living realm?? Rats! Thanks for the input. I appreciate your thoughts. I think I need to make up a new word! 😉