Re: Re: Haiku practice (for fun) and attempt at a Quatrain

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I like these, especially the first one–it fits the traditional haiku pattern best I think, but without feeling constrained by it. I’ve never been able to write a decent haiku–they always turn into limericks (I blame my father–we used to have contests 😉 ).