Re: Re: Haiku practice (for fun) and attempt at a Quatrain

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Most enjoyable read, however Summer Carnival felt flat, not strong like the others, almost feels like it’s a token feel good stanza. The title of the first one, for me doesn’t quite match the emotion, perhaps something like Vacant Nest.

About that Mayan Calendar, you do know that todays scientists are predicting the Earth to tilt on its axis in 2012. Which I feel it what is the real cause to the so called global warming, a natural earthly condition that may bring a new ice age. Wonder if we will be granted a new lease?