Re: RE: Good Morning America. . . Wake-up!

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Hi Wanda Mae

A rant indeed.  You make some good points about all that is bad, but say nothing really to correct it.  A few mentions of Christ, but nothing concrete for a person to hold onto and take up the cross.  You began your article with quotes from Herbert Armstrong.  How about finding someone who has written positive articles about what is good about this country.  It would make your article much stronger and leave the reader with a positive feeling.  I think you are defeating your purpose by not adding the positive ending and just adding fuel to all that is wrong by leaving it has you have. 

Just a thought and hope it helps.

Lillies