Re: Re: Goddess; 2nd half first chapter

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mcyu520
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Hi Leslie,

You certainly don’t write like those authors I mentioned, you have a far better prose style, so I’m sure you’ll get there in the end. And as you read a lot, and by the sounds of it love writing, I bet it won’t take you too long, either.

Good luck.