Re: RE: God is Love – 944 words

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Hi Carol

How nice to see you in this section.  You’ve written a nice piece, but did you say the transition Elizabeth mentioned would mean rewriting the book or did you mean just this essay?  I was confused.  Anyway, I agree with Elizabeth, the jump made me hesitate and I had to assume that somewhere along the line you decided to believe differently. It would be nice to know how you came to believe differently and know that God is Love. 

Lillies