Re: Re: God is Love – 944 words

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Bruce
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Carol,
This is a well written and clearly understood peice. The only issue I have is with paragraphs 2 and 3. You suddenly go from living in fear of God’s wrath to a God of comfort. You do not mention how you got from one position to the other. You just jumped from one strong belief to the opposite belief. I think it might work better if you add how the transition happened. How did you meet the God of Comfort?

I really enjoyed reading this.
Elizabeth
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