Re: Re: Ghosts

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ghoulie
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Hi Janet –

I like what you’ve done with that first stanza! When I read it again, especially after seeing your response coupled with the revised first stanza, I didn’t stumble on the second stanza where I had trouble yesterday. 🙂 You do nice work, ma’am.