Re: Re: For My Sister

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LorrieAT
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Shonte’, I love it. It makes me wish I had a sister. I have only brothers who would never appreciate this as much as I do. Elibet is right I think the greeting card people would love it. They might want to split it into 2 or 3 poems. Or you might consider that before you send it.

Gilbert