Thanks Linda. This one has been “finished” for some time, although I recently revised a little bit. I may have to some more after this critique session. I am currently working on the next 3 in the sequence. One actually writing and the other two drafting ready to go. The Quest was originally intended to be an epic poem but I thought about it for too long (3 months!) and when I started to write, well 4 hours later I had the story. Eventually the 10th will be the epic poem (as told by a character in the 2nd story). I’m not writing quite so fiercly at the moment cos I’m confused by poetry and I need the drafts done otherwise I’ll have to think for 3 months for each one!
I don’t know if its better than my poetry cos its so different but I appreciate the thought.
Look out for the post… Cheers