Re: RE: Fantasy query

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knightsilver
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I’m still wondering-something maybe like Jola must reveal when those before her are lying-a dangerous task to have when….

then that second line is the how? Gifted with a viper by the God Naga, Jola blah blah the rasp of sandpaper blah blah

I still need more coffee. *sigh*