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Bruce
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What beautiful scenes Dave.

I think I found a couple of typos:

WINTER(‘)S MOON

White crystalline flakes blowing
through the air, no two a
matching pair, bright Wolf moon
sailing overhead, as angry clouds
scurry past to deliver winter(‘)s
chilling blast.

SPRING(‘)S SONG

Melting snow and the Crocuses
begin to grow, vibrant pastels of
pink and yellow, standing tall;
shaking off winter(‘)s frosty cold.

SUMMER(‘)S DREAM

Summer(‘)s fare, children’s laughter
fills the air, mid summer(‘s) rockets
red glare and honeymooners
everywhere, barefoot strolls along
the beaches and baseball pitches.
Oh; those warm summer night (s)?
Should always last .

Elizabeth
Ps I have no idea why the smily faces came up!