Re: Re: Estatic! (Literally just typed this one as well) Fresh off my Mind!

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jayrbee777
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Had to read it several times to “get it” (but I think I do . . . now . . . maybe). Feels like a metaphor, drawing a parallel, between physical/sexual release and the creative expression/release of the writer at his/her craft. (Go ahead, tell me I’m nuts. Won’t be the first time. ;)) If that’s what it is — and even more so if it’s not — it would benefit from some careful editing for clarification. I kind of like your choice of cap’d letters — but then I do that too, so it’s a personal thing. As a first draft, I think it’s got potential. 🙂