Re: Re: Estatic! (Literally just typed this one as well) Fresh off my Mind!

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IleanaCarmina
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just off the top of my head I would say you really don’t need all the caps that you have used. Chaos and aqueducts > I beleive is the correct spelling. If you would center this it forms a potted tree, in case you were wondering. needs some work but very nice read all in all.