Re: RE: Environmentalist

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riverstone – 2007-12-12 6:17 PM

Okay, I changed protect to guard in the line in question…is that any better???

Yes, Karen, I do tend to wear my heart on my sleeve…don’t I??????   LOL  Riv

Riv, was that change due to my post that I thought about then didn’t post?

Yes one less syllable in that line works.

And Riv, you have a huge heart, bigger than … well, the state of Texas.

Wear it proudly upon your sleeve… it suits you.

Karen 😉