Re: RE: Environmentalist

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rog0622
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Lark – 2007-12-13 5:57 AM Hey Riv, was thinking maybe that your second line in the second stanza could read just “guard forest canopy” That way, the poem would keep a more consistent rhythm throughout.

Lark!  That’s it!  Thank you…edit underway.  Why couldn’t I see the forest for the trees????

🙂  Riv