Re: Re: eh…maybe

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jayrbee777
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Cathy, I like your poem, and its message. As for breaking it up: for this poem, think lots of breaks — I’d do it at (almost) every period. If you make each stanza short, it will mimic the snapping of the double dutch jump rope tempo. Nice!