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sreicher
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its a nice free verse poem, with a tad limerick (sing-song) tucked in

hmmmm, im not a rhyme poet per say but i do like white space to break up “stanzas” so take what i have to say as you’d like, but it could be a bit stronger and i think breaks inbetween lines would help that but the content is great

keep it up