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JudyJudyJudy
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it’s pretty…i like the use of color in any poem. i would suggest that you read the article on unnecessary adjectives and adverbs. i found it incredibly helpful when writing nature-related poetry. (not that there’s problems here, just thought i’d pass on a tidbit)