Re: Re: Dripping in Sin

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Angela Roquet
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Gilbert, I have little faith in weathermen or umbrellas resurrected.
Good one York, Im following you from now on.
Thanks Tera, glad you liked it
Elizabeth, I was messing around. I saw some well dressed man use the lords name (something I also like to do with a four letter combo thrown in) when it started raining. So this really isn’t that well thought out.
Cathy, decent, that’s about as good as it gets sometimes.
Thanks Jason for the kind words. Maybe I’ll work on it more.