Re: Re: Drifting

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barb schmeling
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Drifting on my bed of poor
now perched atop a cabin door
while gentle winds blow through my hair
searching for another fare.

Lisa, this is my favorite stanza, I love the way it flows and it is well written. Great job. :emoticon: